Sunday, January 10, 2010

Abba Abba Ballet

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in the mid
st
of every day
every twirl
my life is surrounded
by the liquor amnii
of earth
this womb
these lessons
readying me to be born
a third time



photo is "ballet smoke art" (google re-use)

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10 comments:

  1. Being born a third time -- like that.

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  2. Hi Glynn, thank you for coming over!

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  3. Wow. Loved that. (Although I must admit I had to google "liquid amnii" because I didn't know what it meant!)

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  4. Lorrie Ransom this is very short amazing poem i really love it ..very creative

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  5. Katdish ~ thanks leaving a comment! I have to also admit that I went back and forth over whether to use those words or not. I like things to be simple but I just had to leave it in :-)

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  6. Lawi, what a wonderful surprise to receive a visit from you!!! I appreciate your gracious response - gives me the happy heart. Be blessed.

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  7. Very original Lorrie, I learned a new word or two :)

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  8. Marja ~ :-) Sometimes I can't help myself.. sorry! LOL

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  9. I like that..."being born a third time"...made me stop and think.

    Thanks for sharing!!
    Bina

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  10. Bina ~ so nice of you to come over and leave a comment!

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