Thanks nAncY!! Glad you came over...
Simple. Lovely."whet against the soul" is marvelous
i love haiku - so gentle - so packed full - this one was very soft and powerful.
L.L. and sojourner, you spoil me with your comments. Love to you both :-)
lay quiet. lay still. i can hear Him.
Thanks Lorrie for coming over to read my poem, I am glad you enjoy some of my poems! I have a couple of questions for you... have you ever had anything published? [because you should seriously consider that!] And do you know of any sites that can help with writing all sorts of poetry writing and styles?
Vee - I've been feeling pretty 'blocked' with my writing lately.. thank you so much for your encouragement!! I've had a few things published via on-line zines but haven't submitted for years now. My favorite writing site on the web is http://christianwriters.com. This is actually where I got the prompt at for this haiku! It's a writing "community" - bulletin board style. I've been wanting to delve into different styles myself so if I find something neato along those lines specifically I'll pass it along to ya!Blessing galore :-)
"Whet against the soul" - wow. Simple and powerful. That one's going to stick with me for a while...
whoa doggies, this is good...