Wednesday, July 8, 2009

Tambourine



Tambourine
black half moon and silver tongued
bring me your primitive story
tell how your voice praised Yahweh
tell how David danced with all his might





This is a Random Act of Poetry prompt response (whew, say that a few times real fast!). If you are interested in a little poetry fun then check it out!.



12 comments:

  1. the graphic is indeed as beautiful as the words Lorrie, thanks!

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  2. I love this. What a perfect combination of vivid imagery and praise poetry.

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  3. Thanks Marja, thanks Marcus! I'm so glad you like it. I love the RAP challenges :-)

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  4. Your poem makes me want to dance - nice.

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  5. mom2six ~ Hi! Thanks for coming over.. glad you are inspired :-)

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  6. Yes, a Tambourine could do that couldn't it? I'm glad you got back into RAP :0)

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  7. Thanks Billy, thanks sojourner. I love the RAP... I need it!

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  8. Brilliant Lorrie! I have given it shot too. I haven't written poetry for some time now. Out of practice!

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  9. Livingjourney! Hi! Thanks so much for the word of encouragement. Poetry is really my first writing love but I am out of practice too. I think that is why I love LL's prompts so much. I bought the book she referred to in hopes of kick starting my muse (don't really like that word), Poemcrazy. So far it's very good!

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  10. Really, really hit home.
    Thank you.
    Monica

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  11. the last line give me chill bumps
    and makes me want to dig deep and dance

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