WALL
There you sit
on your pedestal
munching
munching
my ideas of heaven
like a rabbit
with its lettuce
oblivious
eyes wide
immune to revelation
your pride
red
and hard as brick
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Nice! "Your pride red and hard as brick" i like and can relate!
ReplyDeleteHi Sojourner!! Thanks for coming over. I think most of us struggle with pride.. yuk!
ReplyDeleteBlessings to you :-)
I love the sounds in this part...
ReplyDeletelike a rabbit
with its lettuce
oblivious
Great poem. I think I'll be gathering these for next Friday (as opposed to this Friday : )
L.L., Poems don't come to me as easy as they did years ago. Sure enjoy getting to be a part :-) Thanks for creating these opportunities. It's a great doorway to meeting others in the family!
ReplyDeleteThanks Lorrie... I don't think poetry is where my gifting is... well, not in the english language anyway (my vocabulary is too small, haha).
ReplyDeleteMarja ~ I'm not sure it's mine either but I do love it and can't resist now and then trying my hand at it :-)
ReplyDeleteThanks for coming over!